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Here are some ideas for classroom poetry writing. I hope they might be of use to you. If you come up with ideas of your own which you'd be willing to share, I'd be grateful to know about them and to add them to my soup pot.
A good way to get students started writing acrostics is to begin by putting someone's initials on the board (I always use my own) and then have the class think of how many little clusters of three words they can write that begin with those three letters. They should come up with a variety of possibilities. (Tell them they can't repeat a word that was already used.) For my initials, SRK, students have come up with everything from Smashing Rowdy Kangaroos to Slimy Rotten Kiwifruit. This is a good warm-up exercise to get them into an acrostic frame of mind.
You can use as your spine words vocabulary words or key words from any subject the class may be studying, from scientific or mathematical terms to the names of historical figures. Often using a word for an acrostic embeds it in the mind.
For a variation on the acrostic, you could have the students write a poem using a spine phrase, where each word of the phrase must begin a line of the poem. These phrases could be proverbs, book or movie titles, slang expressions, song lyrics, a line from a favorite poem, or just a sentence or phrase that has special meaning for your class. Here's an example:
THE mermaid lived in an
OLD boat under the waves, where no
MAN swam, only dolphins
AND giant squid. She often watched
THE waves roll and sang haunting
SEA chanties all night long.
Another kind of "name" poem is to have each student write down every variation of his/her name, including nicknames and middle names, and then see how many words can be made out of the resulting letters. Then have the student select five or ten of the anagram words and use those words in a poem.
Some other ideas are:
-- Have the students write an acrostic using a word selected at random from the dictionary.
-- Have everyone in the class write an acrostic using the same spine word to see the wide variety of ideas that can be generated from the same beginning. (An easy and successful word to use for this is "fun".)
-- Do an alphabet poem where in each line all the main words must begin with a single letter of the alphabet:
All the annoying aardvarks
Began to bombard the blue boat.
This poem could be passed around so each student could add the next line using the next letter of the alphabet.
-- Pick five letters of the alphabet and have each student in the class write a line where each of the five letters begins a word. ABCDE could produce lines like:
A baby could drown easily.
Emily Dickinson crunches a bagel.
Dogs eat biscuits and candy.
-- Write the letters of your spine word on a diagonal so that they are used for the first word in line one, the second word in line two, the third word in line three, and so on.
It can also be fun to have the students write the spine word in ornate letters, like illuminated manuscripts, to turn an acrostic into a combined writing/art project that makes an attractive display for the hall or classroom.
Students may enjoy inventing imaginary words in small groups, with each student making a list of ten syllables that might begin a word, then passing this list to the next student to add another syllable - or simply taking those first syllables and looking at all the different ways they might be combined to make words. Imaginary words can be used in poetry to talk about anything so new and wonderful it needs a new language to describe it: a new sport, a new kind of animal, a new holiday, a new food, etc. A poem using an imaginary word can be a good one in which to use simile: a "whiffmiller" smells like..., tastes like..., etc.
Another way of using words from another language is to read a short poem in French or Spanish or some other language and have the students invent a translation for it. Then compare their guesses to the actual translation. If you can find music to fit the mood of the poem, you might want to play that in the background while the students are working.
If you or some of your students are fluent in a second language, you might want to use words from that language in a poem. Have the students write poems about colors, for instance, but instead of using the English words for each color, put color words from another language and their English translations on the board, and have the students use the nonEnglish words. Each line of the poem should contain a nonEnglish word. Read these poems aloud and listen to their music.
Or if you have students who speak several different languages, choose a single word (the word for poetry, for instance, or the word for friendship) and write it on the board in all the languages. Have the students use the word in their poem at least one time in each language.
Students could use a word in another language to begin each line of a list poem. (For more about list poems, see below.)
Sixers are simply six line poems. This kind of poem, short and with very specific guidelines but plenty of room for imagination, seems to work well with younger students. An amusing kind of sixer is a poem written in the voice of an alien creature. One way to get the students started is to begin with the "What do I look like?" question. Make a list on the board of everything that might be described: mouth, nose, hair, neck, belly, etc. And then another list of the specific qualities that might be described: size, shape, color, number, etc. Have the students write just one line and read it aloud. Then present the idea of making comparisons. My eyes are like maple leaves or antennae or purple golf balls. Encourage them to come up with unusual comparisons. You might want to let your class come up with their own list of questions to answer. You may want to have only six questions so that every student follows exactly the same format.
If students enjoy writing alien poems, they might also enjoy
writing poems about the planets from which their aliens come. There are so
many possible subjects: plant life (maybe they grow mustaches on trees),
animal life (maybe their ants are the size of grizzly bears or their dogs
the size of molecules), weather (maybe it rains erasers), landscape, buildings,
etc. Students could be broken into small groups and each group assigned to
one aspect of life on this planet. Students could write about what a school
is like on this planet. What is a kitchen like? What would a student's
bedroom be like? Or each student could write about his own particular
planet, just presenting some of the highlights. Here's an example:
The Planet Galliwake
Sometimes it rains canteloupes
And sometimes it rains shoes.
The clothes hanger plants
Jangle us awake every morning,
And the roosters crow us to sleep.
When the seven moons rise,
All the green pigs
Lie down on the stars and sing.
Aliens and alien planets in poetry are subjects that lend themselves to wonderful artwork, so the final versions of such poems might end up as poem- drawings. Also, it can be fun to cover a very large cardboard box with construction paper, creating a "square planet". Each student can cut out an island or continent from a different color construction paper, write a poem about some aspect of life in that place, and paste it onto the planet.
A terrific suggestion from fourth-grade teacher, Erica York, of Grain Valley, MO, is to write alien/planet poems and draw the pictures, then exchange poems with another class. Those students read the poems without seeing the pictures and then draw what they see in the poems, so the students have the fun of comparing what each got out of the same poem.
Sixers are very easy and versatile to use for any kind of topic. You can set up a structure of six questions that students can answer as a framework for the poem, or you can treat a sixer as a very short list poem (see below for more about list poems): six things that make you mad, six favorite foods, six things that happen in the spring, six things you see at a circus, six things that insects do, etc.
The chant, one of the oldest forms of poetry, uses a word, line, or phrase, repeated over and over, to give the poem its rhythm and shape. Chants don't have a specific fixed form, but can use their repeated elements in a variety of ways. Long poems work well as chants because they allow space for the rhythm to build.
Almost any kind of word or phrase can be chosen as the repeated item in a
chant, but it should be chosen with care since the repeated element is
the heart of the poem. Students might choose to repeat a phrase like:
my dog
my brother
my best friend
I am afraid when
When I was younger
If I ruled the world
I wish
In my dreams
Or perhaps a word such as: secret, happiness, enormous, Halloween, listen, laugh, etc. The possibilities are endless. You might want to suggest them by categories.
The repeated item could be the object being written about:
this white vase
the atlatl
the monarch butterfly
Or a person, perhaps performing an action the chant describes:
the hunter
once a woman
when the potter held the clay
the painter dipped his brush and
Or a place:
in the forest
in ancient Greece
at the banana museum
Or the time period the chant describes:
in the cretaceous period
long ago
when the willows bloom
every winter
The poem might directly address the reader in some way:
look at
listen to me
let me tell you
Or describe feelings:
It is glorious.
I wish
When I saw..., I felt
I am happy because
Or repeat variations on a single word, such as a color.
Prepositions or prepositional phrases often work well for chant poems. A
poem could, for instance, start in a student's bedroom and, using "beyond,"
move out farther and farther until it reached distant galaxies. Or the poem
could remain in the bedroom. A phrase like "in my room," could be
used for a poem that described a room, or talked about the things that
happened in that room, or revealed how the writer felt when s/he was in the
room, etc. In the sample poem below, the simple phrase "on top of the"
is used to move the chant along:
Ceramic Bowl
On top of the table four scaly feet,
On top of the feet a plain white base,
On top of the base a dragon crouched
with big white eyes staring up,
On top of the dragon a white bowl
whose handles are two griffins' heads,
On top of the bowl a curved lid,
On top of the lid a tiny man,
with long mustache and pony tail,
Trying to climb out.
Once the poet has chosen what to repeat, he needs to use specific sensory
and factual details to complete the lines:
I am happy because the golden duck on this screen flies high.
I am happy because the reeds beneath him shine like....
The repeated line or phrase might emphasize the most important aspect of the subject. If the outstanding feature of an Egyptian exhibit, for instance, was the pharoah's golden throne, a poet might use that fact to create a chant, describing some other part of the exhibit and then saying, "And the pharoah's throne was gold." Another detail and then again, "And the pharoah's throne was gold." Keep coming back to that one outstanding part of the exhibit until the reader can see it shine.
Or the repeated words or line can be used to emphasize feelings about the subject of the poem. Writing about a musical instrument that is no longer played, for instance, a poet might want to repeat a sad line like "The song has ended now" between details about what the instrument must have sounded like, where it was played, who might have played it, and on what occasion it was played
Be sure, however, that - whatever repeated line or phrase is used to connect and move the poem - students also include lines which vary the pattern to avoid monotony. It would be a good idea to emphasize those two key words: "repeat" and "change." Both are necessary for a good chant poem.
For examples of chant poems, see "Sleeping Outdoors" by Marchette Chute and "Silver" by Walter de la Mare (which can be found in the collection, A Pocketful of Stars, compiled by Nikki Siegen-Smith). Or read The Circle of Thanks, told by Joseph Bruchac, which contains many poems that use chant elements in a variety of wonderful ways.
You might want to locate a volume of traditional African or Native American poetry in your library or bookstore and read aloud to the students some of the outstanding examples of repetition and variation you will find there. One good possibility would be Brian Swann's Wearing the Morning Star. For upper grade levels, you might want to examine a poem like "Bavarian Gentians" by D.H. Lawrence. This poem repeats some form of the word "dark" eighteen times in nineteen lines.
Whatever kind of chant poems your students write, enough time should be set
aside so the poems can all be read aloud as this is a form which derives
from oral traditions and has much pleasure to provide to listeners.
A lune is a short, simple poem of three lines: Here are two sample lunes: Drum with Painted Scene Brass Cymbals In the first sample lune above, notice that the title is a necessary part
of the poem. If the reader didn't know that a scene was painted on the drum,
the lune wouldn't make sense. If the title lets the reader know what the poem
is about, then the rest of the lune can simply be a comment on it. Remind students that because a lune is so short, every word must count
and they should choose each of their eleven words with great care. Ask them
to examine each word in their lunes before they declare the poems finished.
This is an opportunity to talk a little bit about revision and to mention
that serious poets examine every poem they write - no matter how long - in
this painstaking, word-by-word fashion. Students could find subjects for lunes by simply
looking around the classroom or walking quietly around the school or circling
the playground or the block. If you take them on a short inspirational walk,
instruct them to keep all of their senses wide open. Remind them that a
large part of being a good writer simply involves paying attention to the
world.
Or you could bring in to the classroom some interesting objects the students
might want to write about. Or some ordinary objects they might try to look
at in new ways. This would be an opportunity to talk about simile and
metaphor. Hold up the object and ask questions like: "A grapefruit is
as yellow as what? As round as what? As juicy as what? Smells like what?
Tastes like what? What does a grapefruit sound like when you eat it? When
you step on it? What other object might a grapefruit remind you of? What
animal does a grapefruit make you think of? What person? What place?"
etc. Or you could simply present the lune form and let the students use
it in any way they choose. If some students have trouble getting started,
you might suggest possible openings to stimulate their thinking, such as:
The lune is a very easy way to explore the constraints and possibilities of
form, and if some of your students want to be more ambitious, they could
write double lunes or triple lunes or even longer poems in which each stanza
is a lune. Most kids have a lot of fun writing about imaginary animals. A. One way to do this is to start with a real animal and change
it to its opposite. Have students make a list of all the real
characteristics of a favorite animal, writing them down the left
side of a sheet of paper. Encourage them to be as specific and
detailed as they can and to think of as many traits as possible. huge/tiny If they can't think of an opposite, they can just use a negative: has a trunk/does not have a trunk Once they have a long list of opposite characteristics, let them use those
as a springboard for a poem describing an imaginary animal that possesses
those qualities. Encourage them to expand on their list of opposites.
Instead of just using "tiny," they might say "the size of an ant." B. Another way to create an imaginary animal is to start with a list
of comparisons: eyes like..... cantaloupes Encourage the students to make as many comparisons as possible (maybe the class
could work together to put a list on the board of all the aspects of the animal
that could be compared to something else) and to try to make their comparisons
imaginative and unexpected. When they have a long list of comparisons, they
can choose the best five to ten of them to use in their poem. They might
enjoy making up a name for their animal too. C. Still another way to create an imaginary animal is to combine a
familiar animal with another animal or with an object. Students
could create a blackboard beetle, a desk monkey, a dog-lizard, a
cat-snake, a fish-giraffe, an ant-gorilla. Here are several examples of imaginary animals: The Turtle-cat For a wonderful classroom display, have the students create a mural of an
imaginary zoo, with their poems and drawings of imaginary animals. Another kind of poem that can generate wonderful imaginative ideas is a
dream poem. In each line of the poem, the student describes what an animal
or an object dreams about at night. The dog dreams of his leash. This can also make an easy kind of class poem, with each student contributing
one line - or with you naming an object or animal and the class deciding what
it might dream about. For any of these poems, it's helpful to make up sample lines yourself or
pull them from the students during the introductory discussion. Hearing
lines of poetry immediately before writing can stimulate the imagination (as
long as students know they can't just copy the examples).
Writing poetry lets kids delight in the music and beauty and excitement of
language, and there's no way to do it wrong. I hope you enjoy sharing that
delight with them. A list poem is a poem in which every line is one item in a list.
For instance, students could write a poem in which every line contains a color. There are
several ways to do this. A poem might be about Things That Are Red, where
every line lists something red. You might encourage them to use not only
simple objects ("apples," "Valentine hearts") but also
descriptive phrases ("my nose when it's cold," "the last line
of sky before dark") or feelings ("my face when I spilled my cocoa
and everyone laughed," "the air I breathe out when I'm mad").
You could have a warm-up where you pick a color and the students see how many
different things they can list for that color. Then you could have them each
pick a favorite color and simply make a list of words that color makes them
think of, any words at all. Have them choose five or six of those words and
develop each word into a line for the poem.
Color poems steer the students toward specific, sensory language and give you
a chance to praise that. And if some students list only objects, a word or
two on a line, and others write longer lines, you have the opportunity, when
they read their poems aloud, to point out how the rhythm and music of a
short-lined poem is fast and punchy compared to the movement of a longer
lined poem.
Or a poem could be about the color itself. Try to get the students thinking
about the color in new ways. What does red taste like? What kind of music
is red? If red was a famous person, who would red be? If you touch red,
what does it feel like? What kind of animal would eat red? Who or what
loves red the most? What's the first thing red does when it gets up in the
morning? What part of the school is red? If red had a wish, what would it
wish for? Write a poem in which every line is a thank you to someone or
something. A student might want to thank his father, his dog, his baseball
bat, his pencil, the sky, the person who invented ice cream. Be sure the
student says exactly what he is thankful for (thanking his pencil for
writing down all his math problems or his mother for packing a tuna fish
sandwich in his lunch). Once your students get involved in list poems, you can select
any evocative word or phrase for them to include in every line. It might be
a word or phrase connected to a subject the class is studying or a word or
phrase that has special resonance for your particular class. Sometimes
poetry creates a whole new slant on a subject and produces unexpected
responses.
Some words and phrases that can work well are: "I remember,"
"at midnight," "secret," "thunder,"
"listen," "never," "laugh,"
"tomorrow." Or try any of the following: A poem in which each line describes a day where everything
happens backwards A great idea from fourth grade teacher Shelley Plum in Bristow,
OK, is "Seek and Find." The students look in articles, poems, comics,
etc. for words or phrases they like and use those in their own poems.
In a list poem, each line could contain one of those "found" words or
phrases. They aren't, of course, allowed to use complete lines from anyone
else's work. To check the Kids Can Write contest rules, click here. To return to the main screen, click here. To see the Mrs. Brown on Exhibit guide to writing poetry,
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Lunes
a line with three words
a line with five words
a line with three words
More flexible than the haiku, it doesn't involve the distraction of
counting syllables. Because this is such a short form, you need to pick
a single simple object and make it the subject of your lune.
Pond with trees;
the drummer learns to play
ripple and leaf.
Cymbals I clang
on my thumb sound softer
than my OWWW!
Here I am
In the sky
In the sea
In this room
When I cry (or sneeze, shout, laugh, etc.)
On Christmas morning
In the dark.
Poems of High Imagination
long neck/short neck
flies/does not fly
ears like.....American flags
sounds like.....a faucet dripping
moves like.....a man with a limp
fur like.....notebook paper
The turtle-cat has a pink plaid shell
With flowers growing on it.
It has a turtle head with furry ears.
It says "Meow-ow-ow-oh" when it's mad.
It scratches you with its green claws.
It eats mouse-bugs and purple lettuce
And drinks strawberry Koolaid.
At night it curls up inside its shell
And purrs.
The Light Bug
The light bug flies after midnight.
It wears a ruffled shade on its head
And has two antennae
With teeny lightbulbs on the end.
There's a switch on its back
Where you turn it off.
Light bugs eat electricity from outlets.
They perch on your windowsill
And sizzle, "Splizzt, splizzt"
Until you fall asleep.
The Roar-a-boo-jee
The roar-a-boo-jee lives in the deepest swamp.
Its wail sounds like an oboe at night.
The alligators run when it comes,
For its claws are sharp as razor blades
And its teeth are nine inches long
And its tail is a hatchet blade.
It looks like a shadow in the shadows
Until it jumps - wham! - and grabs you - pow! -
And swallows you down like a Twinkie.
The coffee cup dreams of a spoon.List Poems
A poem in which each line describes something that's
impossible to do
or something scary
or something that tastes
terrible
or something that tickles